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I would like to point out how many typos and run-on sentences there are in this article. This is journalism at its worst. In more than one paragraph, several sentences are combined into one with no punctuation. The reporter who wrote this copy would do well to sit down with a style manual and a dictionary before composing anything further. An example of a grammatically-incorrect run-on sentence is below. It is just a bunch of phrases thrown together haphazardly. "She has fought this battle she constantly carries Natalee’s story to almost every state in the US she was never going to let it go," says Jug Twitty, a family friend." Here's an example of subject-verb disagreement: "The Holloway-Twitty family along with their friends is probably the only ones who truly understand the Flores's pain: (verb should be "are", not "is", referring to the Holloways and their friends) "... and to find if there is remains from Natalee that what we want," says Jug Twitty. (Should be "are", not "is". Also phrase "that what we want" should be "that is what we want". Finally, the reporter uses "boarder" (as in someone who rents a room, or an animal in a kennel), instead of "border". "Joran has made it to Peru, earlier this morning law enforcement had him walk across the boarder from Chili to Peru, and both families are praying that charges will soon be filed." A little proof reading goes a long way. I expect more from people with journalism training. Perhaps you would like to hire me as a proof reader?